Woh purani yaadein taja ho gayi,
yaad aa gaya mujhko woh tution class ka sama,
Phali baar kisi eak chehra ki taraf nigahon kaa atakna,
Introduction lene keliye bina koi wajah bhi bahana dundana,
Choti choti baton par chidana keliye woh taunting karna,
Phir dheere dheere dosti hona,
Exam time per phir saath saath ghanto notes banana.
Sab kush eakdum se yaad aa gaya.
Exam ke baad career ko lekar thi paresani,
bichar jaane ka bhi daar tha,
Phir aayi results ki pari,
Jisne laadi dono ki jeevan me aandi,
Ladki ko meela Medical College mein dakila,
Aur ladka dhone laga Engineering clg kaa thela,
Phir bhi dono ne na maani haar,
aur bana li GTalk, Orkut, Facebook ko apani dhaar.
Dheere dheere char saal ka safar yuhhi nikal gaya,
Aur ladka Engineer ban gaya.
Aab aayi Nokari ki paari,
Kishmat se lagi Nokari same sahar mein uski.
Aab toh ho gayi uski aish,
Weekend mein hone laga saath ghumene kaa naya cash.
Dheere dheere ho gaye woh friend se best friend
Aur ban gaye unke status singal se complicated.
Saayad yahi tha unke pyaar ka certificate
ki woh naa reh paate the bin baat kiye 1 sec.
Aab aaya ladki ke future study ki paari,
Chali gayi woh MS ke liye vilayat,
Dono ne phir kiya wada,
Bana lenge woh social network ko sahara.
Aab aa gaya unki khani me eak naya twist,
Ladki ke parents ko satane lagi uski saadi kaa kiraa,
kar diya ladke ko unstable kah kar reject
Aur respect karte hue parents kaa,
Dono ne kar diya apni story ko break.
Saayad kahani dono ke liye ban gayi eak sapna.
Yeah kahani sirf do logo ki khani nahi,
Yah kahani saayad aaj ke hajoro nojawano ki hai,
Sirf khani mein degree kaa farak hota hai,
Aur bishar jaane ka reason khabhi cast toh khabhi stability hota hai.
Joh strong hote hai woh ye jheel leete hai,
Toh kush socide jaise kadam utha leete hai,
Phir bhi dosh nojawano par he aata hai.
Aur saari yaaden sirf sapna he reh jaata hai.
8 comments:
nice one(everyone is facing dis truth) ... like it
well try dewasish. Its very true that every time made by people remains in their mind. The thing thats they achive gives them smile when they "Jab jindigi ki kitab ko phir se palatein hai" and if you didnt achive that thans its only become "Sapna" for tham
I will not much comment about this poem the reason you know very well. The thing that is very inportant in that this raise a big socal issue "Toh kush socide jaise kadam utha leete hai,Phir bhi dosh nojawano par he aata hai."
I thing in future people will understood this feel :)
maine yeh story suni hai kahin sayad
its a 21st century man har cheez kismat pe hi chod dega toh ek din kismat hi tujhe chod degi
so stand up for urself most importantly for the person who expects frm u!!
aur haan spelling mistakes bahut hai do rectify it
ok
tk care
well try dewa... nice to see u write something...
Superb Dewashish !! Its very nicely expressed feeling through poem !!!
But In Spite of thinking same should come out from there and there is also life other than this and try to see the world around you and you will find better way to live :)
that y it is said don't stick to one for so long move on find out who's next ....?
and about tuition classes join foreign language or music class on the weekend and still have fun she is 16 i am 24 ..she is school going kid and i am office going boy.........n life is on track .............live the movement stop planning the future........n i make sure this will make u feel new rhythm in ur feet ........MOve On
this is gen next!! today's world moves on every sec and the youth today knws hw best to handle their personal lives.. no one has so much of tym sticking to one single part of life.. there's so much to do!! anywayz nice try
be positive...nd show thm ur capabilities
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